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torndown
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time, time, time

Post by torndown »

Time to take the love
time to stop faking it
time to do what you’ve set out to do
time, time, time

A wonderful little nausea in my stomach as I listen to you breathe
Your lips so thin and tight curled up in a grin you look happy
Happy here with me,

So I guess I’ll take the love this time
I guess I’ll stop faking it this time
I’ll do what I’ve always wanted to this time
time, time, time

Hang on to your ass cause I’m not very good at this business
I’ll try to not do anything I shouldn’t but how the hell will I know?
Just gimme a couple chances,

One time for temptation
Two times for chance
third times the charm they say
time, time, time

Oh but don’t worry bout nothing we won’t let it get weird
We’ll just eschew all the hubbub and live with it
As best we can

It’s gonna happen this time
We’re gonna be fine this time
It’ll all come together in
time, time, time
. . . and miles to go

before i sleep
BeenThere
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Re: time, time, time

Post by BeenThere »

torndown,
Very nice!
When I read the title, I thought the piece would be about how people waste the time which is so dearly missed once it's all gone.
But, either way, I loved it.
Good job.
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