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"Truth is the shit is gettin' deep
Affraid to walk your own land
Or, to close your eyes for sleep
I know the final day's of life are near
But you know I've lived my life
It's for my children I fear
Who know's what lurks in the hearts of men
The One who can cause death
Just by the stroke of a pen
All we can do is live..live as best as we can and to anyone our hearts extend
As for me i will try to love and hate and on this my will shall not bend."


Okay so I'm not a poet but I still have a voice.
PEACE!!

ShaftSupafly,
I think you're a poet...and by the way it doesn't have to rhyme....poetry is the voice of the soul.
Bill

ShaftSupafly,

hello...you sounded fine to me...even though you don't have a polished act....u told the truth....the truth from your point of view...that is what writing is all about to me...if i write the truth from my point of view...i heard u loud an clear....in fact that's how u get started.....someone that is a polished writer...might write scads an scads of writings....an never say anything...an that is the difference....an that is not to say that the writer of nothing......is wrong....we are all good for something......but i heard u loud an clear..later man