The moment you have all been waiting for (mp3 link inside)

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Re: The moment you have all been waiting for (mp3 link inside)

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Gareth,


I'd love too just give me the info and I'll be there ;)
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smjmcomic,

When did you do your first show ever?

You have some good things going on in that bit. I chuckled up a bit. There are a couple places that could have been a little bit better, but seeing as I in no way am a performing stand-up expert, I'll keep it to myself. Unless of course you'd like me to say something. It would be constructive critism--feedback from the audience.

But hey, coolness with the mp3 and keep on! Sigh...I wish I could do the sexy stand-up gigs with y'all...can't start till I get stateside again.

Jane :)
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jane_haze,



By all means let me have it the bits sound a bit rushed cuz I only had 5 minutes to fit all those jokes in my set.
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This is my 2nd year doing stand up.
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After abunch of thought and no sleep I don't think I'm gona use that as my demo I'm going to put some of these notes I have working on and I'm going to put together a new set and use that.
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smjmcomic,

I'll put it in a personal message rather than putting it on the board. K?

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jane_haze,


Sounds good I should be around for another hour or so.
"I'm on the Zoloft to keep from killing y'all"

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