smjmcomic,
When did you do your first show ever?
You have some good things going on in that bit. I chuckled up a bit. There are a couple places that could have been a little bit better, but seeing as I in no way am a performing stand-up expert, I'll keep it to myself. Unless of course you'd like me to say something. It would be constructive critism--feedback from the audience.
But hey, coolness with the mp3 and keep on! Sigh...I wish I could do the sexy stand-up gigs with y'all...can't start till I get stateside again.
Jane

I don't know Karate. But I know Ka-Razy!