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Daddy No...

Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 9:04 pm
by Vee
I haven't written in so long. You niggas make a lady want to write...I wrote this awhile ago....

Daddy No!

To touch me there would be a sin
I said out loud as he began
to stroke me with a warm caress-
he whispered , "Shhh,,,"
and tugged my dress

Daddy No... Don't touch me there
You said you loved me
but , you didn't care-

With no words or warning
you entered me dry
The pain so crucial
I wanted to die.

Now here we are,
you've stained my heart and my soul..
and my innocence is gone
at only 8 years old.

Daddy No!

Vee

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 9:08 pm
by bingolong
Vee,
I'm Speechless!!I'm sure this poem is part of the reason you feel so strongly about the M.J. issue?

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 9:11 pm
by Vee
bingolong,
I can't deny that!

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Fri May 07, 2004 10:16 pm
by vivaknievel
Vee,

Whoa. I don't know what to say either, but I felt like saying *something*.

- Jaye

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Sat May 08, 2004 5:20 am
by Jennifer
Vee,
Tears on my keyboard. I am so sorry.

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Sat May 08, 2004 6:36 am
by Vee
Jennifer,

Well damn...why don't we just change the Poem. This one I wrote in response to a Richard Pryor article and they published it in the next issue...Vibe magazine- the one with Biggie and Faith on the cover.

Emotional Journey

You're born
You go on
You travel and explore
You experience this life
As you haven't before.
No Trains. No Planes
'Cause the change is within-
It flows through your soul like spontaneous sin.
It takes you for a ride
with the anger, hurt and hate
It's a bumpy one of course,
But it's all just a bait.
It's the emotion of love that must be endeared
For it only brings tranquillity
When embraced and not feared.

Vee

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Sat May 08, 2004 7:57 pm
by Vee
astonamous,

Ohh...of course I don't mind! Hi Lexi! This is just one of the many ways we as human are allowed to express ourselves...It all good. The more the merrier!

Lexi, I don't know you but I hope you had a good day. A smile can go along way!!!!!

Astro- thanks for the kind words....It's encouraging...

Vee ;)

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Sun May 09, 2004 9:02 pm
by NickFlanagan
Vee, that's some serious stuff. It's really good too. I'm sort of at a loss for words, but I really just thank you for putting those poems up.

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Sun May 09, 2004 11:37 pm
by vivaknievel
Vee,
Was just thinkin'... hope my post didn't seem sarcastic in any way. I didn't know what to say, because it was pretty stirring. I thought it was very good too.

- Jaye

Re: Daddy No...

Posted: Mon May 10, 2004 8:22 pm
by Vee
vivaknievel,

Thanks guys! A poem is so much like telling the truth. They're so revealing. I really appreciate the support...

Vee
):)