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Daddy No...

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I haven't written in so long. You niggas make a lady want to write...I wrote this awhile ago....

Daddy No!

To touch me there would be a sin
I said out loud as he began
to stroke me with a warm caress-
he whispered , "Shhh,,,"
and tugged my dress

Daddy No... Don't touch me there
You said you loved me
but , you didn't care-

With no words or warning
you entered me dry
The pain so crucial
I wanted to die.

Now here we are,
you've stained my heart and my soul..
and my innocence is gone
at only 8 years old.

Daddy No!

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Vee,
I'm Speechless!!I'm sure this poem is part of the reason you feel so strongly about the M.J. issue?
I went to Zimbabwe. I know how white people feel in America now; relaxed! Cause when I heard the police car I knew they weren't coming after me! 
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bingolong,
I can't deny that!
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Vee,

Whoa. I don't know what to say either, but I felt like saying *something*.

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Vee,
Tears on my keyboard. I am so sorry.
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Jennifer,

Well damn...why don't we just change the Poem. This one I wrote in response to a Richard Pryor article and they published it in the next issue...Vibe magazine- the one with Biggie and Faith on the cover.

Emotional Journey

You're born
You go on
You travel and explore
You experience this life
As you haven't before.
No Trains. No Planes
'Cause the change is within-
It flows through your soul like spontaneous sin.
It takes you for a ride
with the anger, hurt and hate
It's a bumpy one of course,
But it's all just a bait.
It's the emotion of love that must be endeared
For it only brings tranquillity
When embraced and not feared.

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astonamous,

Ohh...of course I don't mind! Hi Lexi! This is just one of the many ways we as human are allowed to express ourselves...It all good. The more the merrier!

Lexi, I don't know you but I hope you had a good day. A smile can go along way!!!!!

Astro- thanks for the kind words....It's encouraging...

Vee ;)
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Vee, that's some serious stuff. It's really good too. I'm sort of at a loss for words, but I really just thank you for putting those poems up.
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Vee,
Was just thinkin'... hope my post didn't seem sarcastic in any way. I didn't know what to say, because it was pretty stirring. I thought it was very good too.

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vivaknievel,

Thanks guys! A poem is so much like telling the truth. They're so revealing. I really appreciate the support...

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