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A Better Place

Posted: Thu May 20, 2004 9:51 pm
by smjmcomic
I dream of a better place

A time when I don't feel the need to hide my face

When all my self doubt is missing without a trace

I dream of a better place

When I can lead a life absent of disgrace

And all these worries wont take this smile off my face

I dream of a better place





Thank you for reading this is the first poem I have ever written so I'd like you know what you guys think ;)

Re: A Better Place

Posted: Fri May 21, 2004 1:54 am
by bingolong
smjmcomic,
I didn't know you had it in you :)

Re: A Better Place

Posted: Fri May 21, 2004 5:44 am
by Jennifer
smjmcomic,
It's beautiful and I know we can all relate to this-including Richard!
:-x