A Better Place

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smjmcomic
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A Better Place

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I dream of a better place

A time when I don't feel the need to hide my face

When all my self doubt is missing without a trace

I dream of a better place

When I can lead a life absent of disgrace

And all these worries wont take this smile off my face

I dream of a better place





Thank you for reading this is the first poem I have ever written so I'd like you know what you guys think ;)
"I'm on the Zoloft to keep from killing y'all"

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Re: A Better Place

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smjmcomic,
I didn't know you had it in you :)
I went to Zimbabwe. I know how white people feel in America now; relaxed! Cause when I heard the police car I knew they weren't coming after me! 
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Re: A Better Place

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smjmcomic,
It's beautiful and I know we can all relate to this-including Richard!
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