I can't help it, if I am smarter than you---
not my fault if you are the fool---
My heart is pure and much stronger than your's
when all you do is bathe is a sewer,
of your anger and hurt
and self-rightous pain
squirming in the dirt--
of your mama's refrain--
bathing in mud of your mama's old pain...
bathing in a mud of your mama's old pain...
we wish you luck and you know your name...
Onomatopoeia
copyright-jlp 2004
You are an Onomatopoeia(pov)
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Re: You are an Onomatopoeia
Jennifer,
Yowsa Yowsa!!! Some poetry you can take literally,figuratively---!!!
Very thought provoking given everything that has been going on lately esspecially when i started thinking about the last four bars....sheds an insightful light on the whole situation.
Yowsa Yowsa!!! Some poetry you can take literally,figuratively---!!!
Very thought provoking given everything that has been going on lately esspecially when i started thinking about the last four bars....sheds an insightful light on the whole situation.
I went to Zimbabwe. I know how white people feel in America now; relaxed! Cause when I heard the police car I knew they weren't coming after me!
Re: You are an Onomatopoeia
bingolong,
Poetry can express things we otherwise might not be able to----
Poetry can express things we otherwise might not be able to----
Re: You are an Onomatopoeia
Jennifer,
That was way cool,(I know some people like that)....You go girl!
That was way cool,(I know some people like that)....You go girl!
Re: You are an Onomatopoeia
Linda Sue,
Re: You are an Onomatopoeia-my pov...
and still an onomatopoeia! 
Re: You are an Onomatopoeia-my pov...
Jennifer,
...and again...
...and again...
